harry potter 05's Horse

[harrypotter05]

Name:Rose
Age:Four
Gender:Mare
Breed:Mustang
Height:15.3
Alliance:Light
Ages in:Summer July 16th
Personality:Very nice and loving.Very brave when she needs to be.Smart knows alot.Loves winter and loves snow.Loves to run in the snow.

Appearance:Black coat with a black mane and tail.Her height is 15.3.Her tail is very black.Her mane is very black.She is all black.She has a medium length mane and her tail is medium length.She is Musclar.

History:She knows alot because when she was a foal she traveled alot with her herd.But as she got older she left her heard so that she could find a new herd.She has been looking for a new herd since she was two.She found a new herd when she was three but she left when she turned four.She has been searching for another herd since left her old herd.

[iceland]

Character Denied
1st you say that the height is 15.3 but in the description you say she is 14.3, you need to choose which one you will use.
2nd)It would be good if you would describe or other than her color, maybe have how she is built, or is her mane long or short, curly anything. It only says that she is black in every sentence.
You could also make the personality description with bit longer sentences but not needed.

Just edit these and a mod or admin will take a look at it.

[iceland]

Character accepted